From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: <c.heiss@proxmox.com> Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id E9289B8AEB for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:30:14 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id D0BCC851D for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:44 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [94.136.29.106]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:44 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id CCF4948906 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:43 +0100 (CET) From: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com> To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:06 +0100 Message-ID: <20240311122938.565228-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.43.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.005 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE -0.01 - Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs v2 0/5] improve & unify installation(-related) documentation X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion <pve-devel.lists.proxmox.com> List-Unsubscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/options/pve-devel>, <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=unsubscribe> List-Archive: <http://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/> List-Post: <mailto:pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com> List-Help: <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=help> List-Subscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel>, <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=subscribe> X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2024 12:30:15 -0000 This series in short tries to bring the documentation for the ISO installation flow and anything related to it in line the with respective documentation for PMG. As both products use the same installer (minus small differences such as LVM options and BTRFS support) and overall same basic system setup, it is worth unifying them. There is (of course) still room for improvement, esp. regarding the apt repo/update section as pointed out by Alex. Still like to get this in rather sooner than later, to not diverge even more. I'll send the appropriate pmg-docs series (see v1 of that [0]) when this has been finalized & applied, to keep it transparent and easier to reason about. [0] https://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pmg-devel/2024-March/002870.html Revision history ---------------- v1: https://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2024-March/062056.html Notable changes v1 -> v2: * dropped already-applied patches * slight rewording in some places based on suggestions Christoph Heiss (5): package-repos: improve wording partly based on pmg-docs installation: iso: improve & align wording with pmg-docs installation: lvm-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs installation: zfs-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs installation: iso: reflow location and password dialog screenshots pve-installation.adoc | 144 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------- pve-package-repos.adoc | 26 ++++---- 2 files changed, 107 insertions(+), 63 deletions(-) -- 2.43.0