From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: <c.heiss@proxmox.com> Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 105E997286 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 4 Mar 2024 14:22:59 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id E0FA8176C6 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 4 Mar 2024 14:22:28 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [94.136.29.106]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 4 Mar 2024 14:22:27 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 87D17487B0 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 4 Mar 2024 14:22:27 +0100 (CET) From: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com> To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com Date: Mon, 4 Mar 2024 14:22:15 +0100 Message-ID: <20240304132221.901327-9-c.heiss@proxmox.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.43.0 In-Reply-To: <20240304132221.901327-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> References: <20240304132221.901327-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.005 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE -0.01 - Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 8/9] installation: zfs-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion <pve-devel.lists.proxmox.com> List-Unsubscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/options/pve-devel>, <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=unsubscribe> List-Archive: <http://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/> List-Post: <mailto:pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com> List-Help: <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=help> List-Subscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel>, <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=subscribe> X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 04 Mar 2024 13:22:59 -0000 These changes are the result of basically "diffing" both documentations, choosing the better prased/sounding sections. Some wording were also slightly changed as necessary to further improve them. The equivalent changes will be done for pmg-docs too, to ensure they are really the same in the end. Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com> --- pve-installation.adoc | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc index c6acc75..a94eb3b 100644 --- a/pve-installation.adoc +++ b/pve-installation.adoc @@ -294,10 +294,10 @@ lvmthin snapshots). [[advanced_zfs_options]] Advanced ZFS Configuration Options ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -The installer creates the ZFS pool `rpool`. No swap space is created but you can -reserve some unpartitioned space on the install disks for swap. You can also -create a swap zvol after the installation, although this can lead to problems. -(see <<zfs_swap,ZFS swap notes>>). +The installer creates the ZFS pool `rpool`, if ZFS is used. No swap space is +created but you can reserve some unpartitioned space on the install disks for +swap. You can also create a swap zvol after the installation, although this can +lead to problems (see xref:zfs_swap[ZFS swap notes]). `ashift`:: -- 2.43.0