From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 1D27B759F5 for ; Tue, 13 Jul 2021 13:00:12 +0200 (CEST) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 1AABC21B63 for ; Tue, 13 Jul 2021 13:00:12 +0200 (CEST) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [94.136.29.106]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS id 69F6521B5D for ; Tue, 13 Jul 2021 13:00:11 +0200 (CEST) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 66A0C41047 for ; Tue, 13 Jul 2021 13:00:10 +0200 (CEST) From: Stoiko Ivanov To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com Date: Tue, 13 Jul 2021 12:59:57 +0200 Message-Id: <20210713105957.2835209-1-s.ivanov@proxmox.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.30.2 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.466 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs] installation: add missing 'you' X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 13 Jul 2021 11:00:12 -0000 small glitch I noticed while reading through the pmg-docs Signed-off-by: Stoiko Ivanov --- With reformat to 80 characters/line this looks far larger (it only adds a you in the first part of the sentence) pve-installation.adoc | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc index 59ab25a..74a356c 100644 --- a/pve-installation.adoc +++ b/pve-installation.adoc @@ -15,11 +15,11 @@ provided by Proxmox include a complete Debian system as well as all necessary TIP: See the xref:faq-support-table[support table in the FAQ] for the relationship between {pve} releases and Debian releases. -The installer will guide through the setup, allowing you to partition the local -disk(s), apply basic system configurations (for example, timezone, language, -network) and install all required packages. This process should not take more -than a few minutes. Installing with the provided ISO is the recommended method -for new and existing users. +The installer will guide you through the setup, allowing you to partition the +local disk(s), apply basic system configurations (for example, timezone, +language, network) and install all required packages. This process should not +take more than a few minutes. Installing with the provided ISO is the +recommended method for new and existing users. Alternatively, {pve} can be installed on top of an existing Debian system. This option is only recommended for advanced users because detailed knowledge about -- 2.30.2