From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 790F960748 for ; Thu, 26 Nov 2020 10:29:50 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 65F12D2C6 for ; Thu, 26 Nov 2020 10:29:20 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [212.186.127.180]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS id C0A7FD2BA for ; Thu, 26 Nov 2020 10:29:19 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 8B66345C52 for ; Thu, 26 Nov 2020 10:29:19 +0100 (CET) From: Dylan Whyte To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com Date: Thu, 26 Nov 2020 10:29:12 +0100 Message-Id: <20201126092912.28245-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.20.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.021 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED -2.3 Sender listed at https://www.dnswl.org/, medium trust SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH pve-installer] installer: minor language fixup X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 26 Nov 2020 09:29:50 -0000 just some nitpicky changes. Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte --- html-common/tags | 1 + html-pbs/page1.htm | 2 +- html-pbs/tags | 1 + html-pve/page1.htm | 8 ++++---- html-pve/passwd.htm | 10 +++++----- html-pve/tags | 1 + 6 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) create mode 100644 html-common/tags create mode 100644 html-pbs/tags create mode 100644 html-pve/tags diff --git a/html-common/tags b/html-common/tags new file mode 100644 index 0000000..408de88 --- /dev/null +++ b/html-common/tags @@ -0,0 +1 @@ +!_TAG_FILE_SORTED 2 /0=unsorted, 1=sorted, 2=foldcase/ diff --git a/html-pbs/page1.htm b/html-pbs/page1.htm index debfdf1..353f780 100644 --- a/html-pbs/page1.htm +++ b/html-pbs/page1.htm @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Please verify the installation target
- The displayed hard disk is used for installation. + The displayed hard disk will be used for the installation.
Warning: All existing partitions and data will be lost.

diff --git a/html-pbs/tags b/html-pbs/tags new file mode 100644 index 0000000..408de88 --- /dev/null +++ b/html-pbs/tags @@ -0,0 +1 @@ +!_TAG_FILE_SORTED 2 /0=unsorted, 1=sorted, 2=foldcase/ diff --git a/html-pve/page1.htm b/html-pve/page1.htm index d76cc8a..0ad0898 100644 --- a/html-pve/page1.htm +++ b/html-pve/page1.htm @@ -17,10 +17,10 @@
The Proxmox Installer automatically partitions your hard disk. It installs all required - packages and finally makes the system bootable from hard disk. + packages and makes the system bootable from the hard disk. All existing partitions and data will be lost.

- Press the Next button to continue installation. + Press the Next button to continue the installation.

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Please verify the installation target
- The displayed hard disk is used for installation. + The displayed hard disk will be used for the installation.
Warning: All existing partitions and data will be lost.

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Graphical user interface
Final configuration will be done on the graphical user - interface via a web browser. + interface, via a web browser.

diff --git a/html-pve/passwd.htm b/html-pve/passwd.htm index b1a8522..1c7d2fc 100644 --- a/html-pve/passwd.htm +++ b/html-pve/passwd.htm @@ -16,9 +16,9 @@

Proxmox Virtual Environment is a - full featured highly secure GNU/Linux system based on Debian. + full featured, highly secure GNU/Linux system, based on Debian.

- Please provide the root password in this step. + In this step, please provide the root password.

@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ Password: - Please use a strong password. It should have 8 or more characters. - Also combine letters, numbers, and symbols. + Please use a strong password. It should be at least 8 characters long, + and contain a combination of letters, numbers, and symbols.

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ - Press the Next button to continue installation. + Press the Next button to continue the installation.

diff --git a/html-pve/tags b/html-pve/tags new file mode 100644 index 0000000..408de88 --- /dev/null +++ b/html-pve/tags @@ -0,0 +1 @@ +!_TAG_FILE_SORTED 2 /0=unsorted, 1=sorted, 2=foldcase/ -- 2.20.1