From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id CBEF5731CA for ; Thu, 27 May 2021 07:45:08 +0200 (CEST) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id BED1119F21 for ; Thu, 27 May 2021 07:45:08 +0200 (CEST) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [94.136.29.106]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS id 151D919F13 for ; Thu, 27 May 2021 07:45:08 +0200 (CEST) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id D4F0242B17 for ; Thu, 27 May 2021 07:45:07 +0200 (CEST) Message-ID: <90953f7d-6aef-9f40-5928-8813b23ce6ac@proxmox.com> Date: Thu, 27 May 2021 07:45:07 +0200 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:89.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/89.0 Content-Language: en-US To: Dylan Whyte , pmg-devel@lists.proxmox.com References: <20210526140851.11670-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com> From: Thomas Lamprecht In-Reply-To: <20210526140851.11670-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL -0.389 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address KAM_ASCII_DIVIDERS 0.8 Spam that uses ascii formatting tricks KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment NICE_REPLY_A -0.001 Looks like a legit reply (A) SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record Subject: Re: [pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs 1/3] replace "e-mail" with "email" X-BeenThere: pmg-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox Mail Gateway development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 27 May 2021 05:45:08 -0000 On 26.05.21 16:08, Dylan Whyte wrote: > in accordance with our technical writing guide applied, thanks, but.. > diff --git a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc > index 0b1c5dd..6d1ab9f 100644 > --- a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc > +++ b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc > @@ -2,53 +2,53 @@ > Planning for Deployment > ======================= > > -Easy integration into existing e-mail server architecture > +Easy integration into existing email server architecture > --------------------------------------------------------- .. heading line needs to be adapted to match in length too, else there may be some (subtle) breakage in rendering/anchoring > > -In this sample configuration, your e-mail traffic (SMTP) arrives on > -the firewall and will be directly forwarded to your e-mail server. > +In this sample configuration, your email traffic (SMTP) arrives on > +the firewall and will be directly forwarded to your email server. > > image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_without_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[] > > -By using the {pmg}, all your e-mail traffic is forwarded to the > -Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the e-mail traffic and > -removes unwanted e-mails. You can manage incoming and outgoing mail > +By using the {pmg}, all your email traffic is forwarded to the > +Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the email traffic and > +removes unwanted emails. You can manage incoming and outgoing mail > traffic. > > image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_with_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[] > > > -Filtering outgoing e-mails > +Filtering outgoing emails > -------------------------- here too. I fixed those above, and the others introduced, in a followup commit.