From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 396AB9713B for ; Mon, 4 Mar 2024 14:22:08 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 17F43173F5 for ; Mon, 4 Mar 2024 14:22:08 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [94.136.29.106]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS for ; Mon, 4 Mar 2024 14:22:07 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 1425F487BC for ; Mon, 4 Mar 2024 14:22:07 +0100 (CET) From: Christoph Heiss To: pmg-devel@lists.proxmox.com Date: Mon, 4 Mar 2024 14:21:54 +0100 Message-ID: <20240304132159.899727-8-c.heiss@proxmox.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.43.0 In-Reply-To: <20240304132159.899727-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> References: <20240304132159.899727-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.005 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE -0.01 - Subject: [pmg-devel] [PATCH docs 7/8] installation: debian: improve & align wording with pve-docs X-BeenThere: pmg-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox Mail Gateway development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 04 Mar 2024 13:22:08 -0000 Most of the changes are taken from pve-docs to align the exact wording in general, as well as changing a few subtle things to improve the overall reading flow. The equivalent changes will be done for pve-docs too to ensure they are really the same in the end. Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss --- pmg-installation.adoc | 20 +++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/pmg-installation.adoc b/pmg-installation.adoc index 26f2dc8..ae60ea9 100644 --- a/pmg-installation.adoc +++ b/pmg-installation.adoc @@ -315,24 +315,22 @@ Then press `Ctrl-X` or `F10` to boot the configuration. Install {pmg} on Debian ----------------------- -{pmg} ships as a set of Debian packages, so you can install it -on top of a normal Debian installation. After configuring the -xref:pmg_package_repositories[package repositories], you need to run: +{pmg} ships as a set of Debian packages and can be installed on top of a +standard Debian installation. +xref:pmg_package_repositories[After configuring the repositories], you need +to run the following commands: -[source,bash] ---- apt update apt install proxmox-mailgateway ---- -Installing on top of an existing Debian installation seems easy, but -it assumes that you have correctly installed the base system, and you -know how you want to configure and use the local storage. Network -configuration is also completely up to you. - -NOTE: In general, this is not trivial, especially when you use LVM or -ZFS. +Installing on top of an existing Debian installation looks easy, but it presumes +that the base system has been installed correctly and that you know how you want +to configure and use the local storage. You also need to configure the network +manually. +NOTE: In general, this is not trivial, especially when LVM or ZFS is used. [[pmg_install_on_debian_container]] Install {pmg} as a Linux Container Appliance -- 2.43.0