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See http://wiki.apache.org/spamassassin/DnsBlocklists#dnsbl-block for more information. [proxmox.com] Subject: [pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs 3/4] faq: language fixup X-BeenThere: pmg-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox Mail Gateway development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 13 Jul 2021 15:54:42 -0000 minor fixup for the FAQ section Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte --- pmg-faq.adoc | 24 ++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/pmg-faq.adoc b/pmg-faq.adoc index c3dbd0e..162a221 100644 --- a/pmg-faq.adoc +++ b/pmg-faq.adoc @@ -22,12 +22,12 @@ What distribution is {pmg} based on?:: What license does the {pmg} project use?:: {pmg} code is licensed under the GNU Affero General Public License, -version 3 (since the 5.0 release). +version 3 (as of the 5.0 release). Will {pmg} run on a 32bit processor?:: {pmg} works only on 64-bit CPUs (AMD or Intel). There is no plan -for 32-bit for the platform. +for 32-bit platform support. [[faq-support-table]] How long will my {pmg} version be supported?:: @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ How long will my {pmg} version be supported?:: {pmg} versions are supported at least as long as the corresponding Debian Version is https://wiki.debian.org/DebianOldStable[oldstable]. {pmg} uses a -rolling release model and using the latest stable version is always +rolling release model, and using the latest stable version is always recommended. + [width="100%",cols="5*d",options="header"] @@ -47,12 +47,12 @@ recommended. |=============================================================================== NOTE: {pmg} releases before 5.0 are not listed here. As they are all EOL (End -Of Life), it's highly recommended to upgrade to a newer version if still in use. +Of Life), it's highly recommended to upgrade to a newer version, if still in use. [[faq-upgrade]] How can I upgrade {pmg} to the next release?:: -Minor version upgrades, for example upgrading from {pmg} in version 5.1 +Minor version upgrades, for example, upgrading from {pmg} version 5.1 to 5.2, can be done just like any normal update, either through the __Node -> Updates__ panel or through the command line with: + @@ -61,15 +61,15 @@ apt update apt full-upgrade ---- + -NOTE: Always ensure you correctly set up the -xref:pmg_package_repositories[package repositories] and only continue with the -actual upgrade if `apt update` did not hit any error. +NOTE: Always ensure that you correctly set up the +xref:pmg_package_repositories[package repositories], and only continue with the +actual upgrade if `apt update` did not hit any errors. + -Major version upgrades, for example going from {pmg} 5.4 to 6.0, are -also supported. They must be carefully planned and tested and should -*never* be started without having a current backup ready. +Major version upgrades, for example, going from {pmg} 5.4 to 6.0, are +also supported. They must be carefully planned and tested, and should +*never* be started without having an up-to-date backup ready. Although the specific upgrade steps depend on your respective setup, we -provide general instructions and advice of how a upgrade should be +provide general instructions and advice on how an upgrade should be performed: + * https://pmg.proxmox.com/wiki/index.php/Upgrade_from_6.x_to_7.0[Upgrade from {pmg} 6.x to 7.0] -- 2.30.2