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Subject: [pbs-devel] applied: [PATCH proxmox-backup] tfa docs: language fixup
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On 04.03.21 15:02, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> Simplifies the introduction a bit and makes it more readable.
> Also some other minor language fixes throughout the section.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  docs/user-management.rst | 57 ++++++++++++++++++++--------------------
>  1 file changed, 29 insertions(+), 28 deletions(-)
> 
>

applied, thanks!