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To: Proxmox Backup Server development discussion
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Subject: [pbs-devel] applied: [PATCH pbs-docs 1/2] docs: admin guide: fix
 grammatical errors and improve English
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On 17.07.20 16:24, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> Mostly fixed typos and grammatical errors.
> Improved wording in some sections to make instructions/advice clearer.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  docs/administration-guide.rst | 40 +++++++++++++++++------------------
>  1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)
> 
>

applied, thanks!