From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 449BD67295 for ; Mon, 9 Nov 2020 13:12:15 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 2E1A816308 for ; Mon, 9 Nov 2020 13:11:45 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [212.186.127.180]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS id 876F3162FB for ; Mon, 9 Nov 2020 13:11:43 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 4B61345CC7 for ; Mon, 9 Nov 2020 13:11:43 +0100 (CET) From: Dylan Whyte To: pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com Date: Mon, 9 Nov 2020 13:11:37 +0100 Message-Id: <20201109121137.8221-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.20.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.023 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED -2.3 Sender listed at https://www.dnswl.org/, medium trust SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record Subject: [pbs-devel] [PATCH pve-installer] PBS installer: Language fixup X-BeenThere: pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox Backup Server development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 09 Nov 2020 12:12:15 -0000 - Correct spelling and grammar - Minor rewordings for readability Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte --- html-common/ack_template.htm | 4 ++-- html-common/country.htm | 10 +++++----- html-common/ipconf.htm | 6 +++--- html-common/success.htm | 2 +- html-pbs/extract1-license.htm | 4 ++-- html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm | 14 ++++++++++---- html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm | 8 ++++---- html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm | 2 +- html-pbs/page1.htm | 6 +++--- html-pbs/passwd.htm | 10 +++++----- 10 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-) diff --git a/html-common/ack_template.htm b/html-common/ack_template.htm index e3e2775..48d7213 100644 --- a/html-common/ack_template.htm +++ b/html-common/ack_template.htm @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
- Please verify the displayed informations. + Please confirm the displayed information. Once you press the Install button, the installer will begin to partition your drive(s) and extract the required files.
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ Keymap: __keymap__ - E-Mail: __mailto__ + Email: __mailto__ Management Interface: __interface__ diff --git a/html-common/country.htm b/html-common/country.htm index 6503afb..990a39f 100644 --- a/html-common/country.htm +++ b/html-common/country.htm @@ -16,11 +16,11 @@

The Proxmox Installer - automatically makes location based optimizations, like - choosing the nearest mirror to download files. Also make sure - to select the right time zone and keyboard layout. + automatically makes location-based optimizations, like + choosing the nearest mirror to download files from. Also make sure + to select the correct time zone and keyboard layout.

- Press the Next button to continue installation. + Press the Next button to continue the installation.

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Country: The selected country is used to choose nearby mirror - servers. This will speedup downloads and make updates more + servers. This will speed up downloads and make updates more reliable.

diff --git a/html-common/ipconf.htm b/html-common/ipconf.htm index fb46510..ed3fd9d 100644 --- a/html-common/ipconf.htm +++ b/html-common/ipconf.htm @@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ Please verify the displayed network configuration. You will need a valid network configuration to access the management - interface after installation.

- Afterwards press the Next button. You will be shown a list of the - options that you chose during the previous steps. + interface after installing.

+ After you have finished, press the Next button. You will be shown a + list of the options that you chose during the previous steps. diff --git a/html-common/success.htm b/html-common/success.htm index a6884b3..218ecff 100644 --- a/html-common/success.htm +++ b/html-common/success.htm @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@

Installation successful!


- The __FULL_PRODUCT_NAME__ is now installed and ready to use. + __FULL_PRODUCT_NAME__ is now installed and ready to use.


diff --git a/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm b/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm index df77fa8..9ceae4f 100644 --- a/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm +++ b/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ - Easy management
For more information, visit www.proxmox.com - or the project page about Proxmox Backup Server. + or the Proxmox Backup Server project page.

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Graphical User Interface
- Easily manage your data backups with the integrated web interface .

+ Easily manage your backups with the integrated web interface.

diff --git a/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm b/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm index 7f80d75..bede21f 100644 --- a/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm +++ b/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm @@ -16,8 +16,12 @@

- Proxmox Backup Server is production-ready and saves you money by reducing the amount of data stored.

The role based permission management combined with the integration of multiple external authentication sources is the base for a secure and stable environment.

- Visit www.proxmox.com for more information about commercial support subscriptions.

+ Proxmox Backup Server is production-ready and saves you money, by + reducing the amount of data stored.

The role-based permission + management, combined with the integration of multiple external + authentication sources provides the basis for a secure and stable + environment.

+ Visit www.proxmox.com for more information regarding commercial support subscriptions.

@@ -36,7 +40,9 @@ RESTful web API
- Resource-oriented architecture (ROA) and declarative API definition using JSON Schema enable easy integration for third party management tools. + The resource-oriented architecture (ROA) and declarative API definition + using JSON Schema enable easy integration for third party + management tools. @@ -44,7 +50,7 @@ Encryption
- To help protect against cyber attacks, encryption of your backups is done on the client-side using AES-256 in GCM mode. + To help protect against cyber attacks, encryption of your backups is done on the client-side, using AES-256 in GCM mode. diff --git a/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm b/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm index ce606b7..4dd1f09 100644 --- a/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm +++ b/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@

- With the Proxmox Backup Server you can safely backup and restore your business critical data.
+ With the Proxmox Backup Server, you can safely backup and restore your business critical data.

@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ Support for Proxmox VE
- The Proxmox Virtual Environment is fully supported and the seamless integration - allows you to easily backup VMs and container.
+ The Proxmox Virtual Environment is fully supported, and the seamless integration + allows you to easily backup VMs and containers.
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Web Console
- SSL secured browser-integrated console view to all datastores.
+ SSL-secured, browser-integrated system console.
diff --git a/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm b/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm index 28efbe4..74069ec 100644 --- a/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm +++ b/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ diff --git a/html-pbs/passwd.htm b/html-pbs/passwd.htm index 07f0d77..d331b28 100644 --- a/html-pbs/passwd.htm +++ b/html-pbs/passwd.htm @@ -9,14 +9,14 @@ -- 2.20.1
Data Integrity
- The built in SHA-256 checksum algorithm assures the accuracy and consistency of your backups.

+ The built in SHA-256 checksum algorithm ensures the accuracy and consistency of your backups.

Compression
diff --git a/html-pbs/page1.htm b/html-pbs/page1.htm index 99b9c7e..debfdf1 100644 --- a/html-pbs/page1.htm +++ b/html-pbs/page1.htm @@ -17,10 +17,10 @@
The Proxmox Installer automatically partitions your hard disk. It installs all required - packages and finally makes the system bootable from hard disk. + packages and makes the system bootable from the hard disk. All existing partitions and data will be lost.

- To continue installation, press the Next button. + To continue the installation, press the Next button.

Graphical user interface
Final configuration will be done on the graphical user - interface via a web browser. + interface, via a web browser.

 
- Administration Password and E-Mail Address + Administration Password and Email Address

@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ - +
Proxmox Backup Server is a - full-featured, highly secure system based on Debian GNU/Linux. + full-featured, highly secure system, based on Debian GNU/Linux.

In this step, please provide the root password.
Password: - Please use a strong password. It should have 8 or more characters. - Also combine letters, numbers, and symbols. + Please use a strong password. It should be at least 8 characters long, + and contain a combination of letters, numbers, and symbols.

To continue installation, press the Next button.To continue the installation, press the Next button.