From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 815C663F04 for ; Fri, 17 Jul 2020 16:25:11 +0200 (CEST) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 7FAA01D415 for ; Fri, 17 Jul 2020 16:25:11 +0200 (CEST) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [212.186.127.180]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS id DB2501D40D for ; Fri, 17 Jul 2020 16:25:10 +0200 (CEST) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 87420430DC for ; Fri, 17 Jul 2020 16:25:10 +0200 (CEST) From: Dylan Whyte To: pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com Date: Fri, 17 Jul 2020 16:25:04 +0200 Message-Id: <20200717142504.6186-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.20.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED -2.3 Sender listed at https://www.dnswl.org/, medium trust SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record Subject: [pbs-devel] [PATCH pbs-docs 2/2] docs: introduction: rewording and fixing of minor errors X-BeenThere: pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox Backup Server development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 17 Jul 2020 14:25:11 -0000 Reworded one sentence for improved readability. Fixed some minor language errors. Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte --- docs/introduction.rst | 20 ++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/introduction.rst b/docs/introduction.rst index a7935fd9..cca8109b 100644 --- a/docs/introduction.rst +++ b/docs/introduction.rst @@ -4,17 +4,17 @@ Introduction What is Proxmox Backup Server ----------------------------- -Proxmox Backup Server is an enterprise-class client-server backup software that -backups :term:`virtual machine`\ s, :term:`container`\ s, and physical hosts. -It is specially optimized for the `Proxmox Virtual Environment`_ platform and -allows you to backup your data securely, even between remote sites, providing -easy management with a web-based user interface. +Proxmox Backup Server is an enterprise-class, client-server backup software +package that backs up :term:`virtual machine`\ s, :term:`container`\ s, and +physical hosts. It is specially optimized for the `Proxmox Virtual Environment`_ +platform and allows you to back up your data securely, even between remote +sites, providing easy management with a web-based user interface. Proxmox Backup Server supports deduplication, compression, and authenticated -encryption (AE_). Using :term:`Rust` as implementation language guarantees high -performance, low resource usage, and a safe, high quality code base. +encryption (AE_). Using :term:`Rust` as the implementation language guarantees high +performance, low resource usage, and a safe, high-quality codebase. -It features strong encryption done on the client side. Thus, it's possible to +It features strong client-side encryption. Thus, it's possible to backup data to not fully trusted targets. @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ Main Features several gigabytes of data per second. :Encryption: Backups can be encrypted on the client-side using AES-256 in - Galois/Counter Mode (GCM_) mode. This authenticated encryption (AE_) mde + Galois/Counter Mode (GCM_) mode. This authenticated encryption (AE_) mode provides very high performance on modern hardware. :Web interface: Manage the Proxmox Backup Server with the integrated web-based @@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Proxmox Backup Server consists of multiple components: * client CLI tool (`proxmox-backup-client`) to access the server easily from any `Linux amd64` environment. -Everything besides the web interface are written in the Rust programming +Everything outside of the web interface is written in the Rust programming language. "The Rust programming language helps you write faster, more reliable software. -- 2.20.1