From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com> Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 803EABAEE3 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Fri, 22 Mar 2024 11:34:12 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 628DE3F32 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Fri, 22 Mar 2024 11:34:12 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [94.136.29.106]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Fri, 22 Mar 2024 11:34:08 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 603F54043F for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Fri, 22 Mar 2024 11:34:08 +0100 (CET) Message-ID: <d417e9ca-a18c-4616-a8ed-066a1b55820e@proxmox.com> Date: Fri, 22 Mar 2024 11:34:06 +0100 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird Beta To: Proxmox VE development discussion <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>, Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com> References: <20240321152941.1971509-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> Content-Language: en-GB From: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com> In-Reply-To: <20240321152941.1971509-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL -0.059 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record Subject: [pve-devel] applied-series: [PATCH docs v3 0/5] improve & unify installation(-related) documentation X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion <pve-devel.lists.proxmox.com> List-Unsubscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/options/pve-devel>, <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=unsubscribe> List-Archive: <http://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/> List-Post: <mailto:pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com> List-Help: <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=help> List-Subscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel>, <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=subscribe> X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 22 Mar 2024 10:34:12 -0000 On 21/03/2024 16:29, Christoph Heiss wrote: > This series in short tries to bring the documentation for the > ISO installation flow and anything related to it in line the with > respective documentation for PMG. As both products use the same > installer (minus small differences such as LVM options and BTRFS > support) and overall same basic system setup, it is worth unifying them. > > There is (of course) still room for improvement, esp. regarding the apt > repo/update section as pointed out by Alex. Still like to get this in > rather sooner than later, to not diverge even more. > > I'll send the appropriate pmg-docs series (see v1 of that [0]) when this > has been finalized & applied, to keep it transparent and easier to > reason about. > > [0] https://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pmg-devel/2024-March/002870.html > > Revision history > ---------------- > v1: https://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2024-March/062056.html > v2: https://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2024-March/062159.html > > Notable changes v1 -> v2: > * dropped already-applied patches > * slight rewording in some places based on suggestions > > Notable changes v2 -> v3: > * fixed small typo > > Christoph Heiss (5): > package-repos: improve wording partly based on pmg-docs > installation: iso: improve & align wording with pmg-docs > installation: lvm-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs > installation: zfs-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs > installation: iso: reflow location and password dialog screenshots > > pve-installation.adoc | 144 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------- > pve-package-repos.adoc | 26 ++++---- > 2 files changed, 107 insertions(+), 63 deletions(-) > applied series, thanks!