From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com> Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 79D146B4A6 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Thu, 10 Dec 2020 20:10:07 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 6A1AC195CE for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Thu, 10 Dec 2020 20:09:37 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [212.186.127.180]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS id C11D7195BE for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Thu, 10 Dec 2020 20:09:36 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 87FC344F89 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Thu, 10 Dec 2020 20:09:36 +0100 (CET) To: Proxmox VE development discussion <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>, Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com> References: <20201126092912.28245-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com> From: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com> Message-ID: <b20c236d-ec0a-cfcd-7c56-d38314586022@proxmox.com> Date: Thu, 10 Dec 2020 20:09:14 +0100 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:84.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/84.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <20201126092912.28245-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Language: en-US Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL -0.068 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment NICE_REPLY_A -0.001 Looks like a legit reply (A) RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED -2.3 Sender listed at https://www.dnswl.org/, medium trust SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH pve-installer] installer: minor language fixup X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion <pve-devel.lists.proxmox.com> List-Unsubscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/options/pve-devel>, <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=unsubscribe> List-Archive: <http://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/> List-Post: <mailto:pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com> List-Help: <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=help> List-Subscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel>, <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=subscribe> X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 10 Dec 2020 19:10:07 -0000 On 26.11.20 10:29, Dylan Whyte wrote: > just some nitpicky changes. > > Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com> > --- > html-common/tags | 1 + > html-pbs/page1.htm | 2 +- > html-pbs/tags | 1 + > html-pve/page1.htm | 8 ++++---- > html-pve/passwd.htm | 10 +++++----- > html-pve/tags | 1 + > 6 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) > create mode 100644 html-common/tags > create mode 100644 html-pbs/tags > create mode 100644 html-pve/tags what are those new "tags" files? from your IDE? They do not seem right to me. > > diff --git a/html-common/tags b/html-common/tags > new file mode 100644 > index 0000000..408de88 > --- /dev/null > +++ b/html-common/tags > @@ -0,0 +1 @@ > +!_TAG_FILE_SORTED 2 /0=unsorted, 1=sorted, 2=foldcase/ > diff --git a/html-pbs/page1.htm b/html-pbs/page1.htm > index debfdf1..353f780 100644 > --- a/html-pbs/page1.htm > +++ b/html-pbs/page1.htm > @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ > <tbody><tr> > <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> > <td valign="top"><b>Please verify the installation target</b><br> > - The displayed hard disk is used for installation. > + The displayed hard disk will be used for the installation. > <br>Warning: All existing partitions and data will be lost. > <br><br> > </td> > diff --git a/html-pbs/tags b/html-pbs/tags > new file mode 100644 > index 0000000..408de88 > --- /dev/null > +++ b/html-pbs/tags > @@ -0,0 +1 @@ > +!_TAG_FILE_SORTED 2 /0=unsorted, 1=sorted, 2=foldcase/ > diff --git a/html-pve/page1.htm b/html-pve/page1.htm > index d76cc8a..0ad0898 100644 > --- a/html-pve/page1.htm > +++ b/html-pve/page1.htm > @@ -17,10 +17,10 @@ > <table> > <tbody><tr><td><b>The Proxmox Installer</b> > automatically partitions your hard disk. It installs all required > - packages and finally makes the system bootable from hard disk. > + packages and makes the system bootable from the hard disk. > All existing partitions and data will be lost. > <br><br> > - Press the Next button to continue installation. > + Press the Next button to continue the installation. > </td></tr> > </tbody></table> > </p></td> > @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ > <tbody><tr> > <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> > <td valign="top"><b>Please verify the installation target</b><br> > - The displayed hard disk is used for installation. > + The displayed hard disk will be used for the installation. > <br>Warning: All existing partitions and data will be lost. > <br><br> > </td> > @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ > <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> > <td valign="top" width="560"><b>Graphical user interface</b><br> > Final configuration will be done on the graphical user > - interface via a web browser. > + interface, via a web browser. > <br><br> > </td> > </tr> > diff --git a/html-pve/passwd.htm b/html-pve/passwd.htm > index b1a8522..1c7d2fc 100644 > --- a/html-pve/passwd.htm > +++ b/html-pve/passwd.htm > @@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ > <td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p> > <table> > <tr><td><b>Proxmox Virtual Environment</b> is a > - full featured highly secure GNU/Linux system based on Debian. > + full featured, highly secure GNU/Linux system, based on Debian. > <br><br> > - Please provide the <i>root</i> password in this step. > + In this step, please provide the <i>root</i> password. > </td></tr> > </table> > </p></td> > @@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ > <tr> > <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> > <td valign="top"><b>Password:</b> > - Please use a strong password. It should have 8 or more characters. > - Also combine letters, numbers, and symbols. > + Please use a strong password. It should be at least 8 characters long, > + and contain a combination of letters, numbers, and symbols. > <br><br> > </td> > </tr> > @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ > </tr> > <tr> > <td valign="top" width="30"></td> > - <td valign="top">Press the Next button to continue installation.</td> > + <td valign="top">Press the Next button to continue the installation.</td> > </tr> > </table> > </p></td> > diff --git a/html-pve/tags b/html-pve/tags > new file mode 100644 > index 0000000..408de88 > --- /dev/null > +++ b/html-pve/tags > @@ -0,0 +1 @@ > +!_TAG_FILE_SORTED 2 /0=unsorted, 1=sorted, 2=foldcase/ >