From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) by lore.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 247971FF143 for ; Sat, 11 Apr 2026 14:50:55 +0200 (CEST) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 06C986DD6; Sat, 11 Apr 2026 14:51:41 +0200 (CEST) From: Kefu Chai To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com Subject: [PATCH docs 4/4] docs: various small grammar fixes Date: Sat, 11 Apr 2026 20:50:36 +0800 Message-ID: <20260411125036.778122-5-k.chai@proxmox.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <20260411125036.778122-1-k.chai@proxmox.com> References: <20260411125036.778122-1-k.chai@proxmox.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Bm-Milter-Handled: 55990f41-d878-4baa-be0a-ee34c49e34d2 X-Bm-Transport-Timestamp: 1775911790680 X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.376 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record Message-ID-Hash: R2E4XKEERLLFB7QH3PDOQHNXWKWWKDWA X-Message-ID-Hash: R2E4XKEERLLFB7QH3PDOQHNXWKWWKDWA X-MailFrom: k.chai@proxmox.com X-Mailman-Rule-Misses: dmarc-mitigation; no-senders; approved; loop; banned-address; emergency; member-moderation; nonmember-moderation; administrivia; implicit-dest; max-recipients; max-size; news-moderation; no-subject; digests; suspicious-header X-Mailman-Version: 3.3.10 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion List-Help: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Small grammar fixes spotted during a proofreading pass of the Ceph-related chapters: * hyper-converged-infrastructure: drop stray article in "a both self-healing..." and split "Checkout" into "Check out". * pve-package-repos: "an selected update" -> "a selected update". * pve-storage-rbd: "is recommend" -> "is recommended". Signed-off-by: Kefu Chai --- hyper-converged-infrastructure.adoc | 4 ++-- pve-package-repos.adoc | 2 +- pve-storage-rbd.adoc | 2 +- 3 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/hyper-converged-infrastructure.adoc b/hyper-converged-infrastructure.adoc index 4616392..cc6199c 100644 --- a/hyper-converged-infrastructure.adoc +++ b/hyper-converged-infrastructure.adoc @@ -48,8 +48,8 @@ Hyper-Converged Infrastructure: Storage infrastructure. You can, for example, deploy and manage the following two storage technologies by using the web interface only: -- *Ceph*: a both self-healing and self-managing shared, reliable and highly - scalable storage system. Checkout +- *Ceph*: a self-healing and self-managing shared, reliable and highly + scalable storage system. Check out xref:chapter_pveceph[how to manage Ceph services on {pve} nodes] - *ZFS*: a combined file system and logical volume manager with extensive diff --git a/pve-package-repos.adoc b/pve-package-repos.adoc index a2882a8..2091ff6 100644 --- a/pve-package-repos.adoc +++ b/pve-package-repos.adoc @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ package management tool like any other Debian-based system. {pve} automatically checks for package updates on a daily basis. The `root@pam` user is notified via email about available updates. From the GUI, the -'Changelog' button can be used to see more details about an selected update. +'Changelog' button can be used to see more details about a selected update. Repositories in {pve} ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ diff --git a/pve-storage-rbd.adoc b/pve-storage-rbd.adoc index 5fe558a..9a52974 100644 --- a/pve-storage-rbd.adoc +++ b/pve-storage-rbd.adoc @@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ The keyring will be stored at # /etc/pve/priv/ceph/.keyring ---- -TIP: Creating a keyring with only the needed capabilities is recommend when +TIP: Creating a keyring with only the needed capabilities is recommended when connecting to an external cluster. For further information on Ceph user management, see the Ceph docs.footnoteref:[cephusermgmt,{cephdocs-url}/rados/operations/user-management/[Ceph User Management]] -- 2.47.3