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Subject: [pve-devel] [RFC PATCH docs-common 06/13] partials:
 advanced-installation: adapt from pve-docs
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Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com>
---
 partials/advanced-installation.adoc | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/partials/advanced-installation.adoc b/partials/advanced-installation.adoc
index ed2709f..271533b 100644
--- a/partials/advanced-installation.adoc
+++ b/partials/advanced-installation.adoc
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 Advanced LVM Configuration Options
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

-The installer creates a Volume Group (VG) called `pve`, and additional Logical
-Volumes (LVs) called `root`, `data`, and `swap`, if `ext4` or `xfs` is used. To
-control the size of these volumes use:
+The installer creates a Volume Group (VG) called +{product-short}+, and
+additional Logical Volumes (LVs) called `root`, `data`, and `swap`, if `ext4` or
+`xfs` is used. To control the size of these volumes use:

 `hdsize`::

@@ -43,8 +43,8 @@ configuration will be adapted accordingly.
 `minfree`::

 Defines the amount of free space that should be left in the LVM volume group
-`pve`. With more than 128GB storage available, the default is 16GB, otherwise
-`hdsize/8` will be used.
++{product-short}+. With more than 128GB storage available, the default is 16GB,
+otherwise `hdsize/8` will be used.
 +
 NOTE: LVM requires free space in the VG for snapshot creation (not required for
 lvmthin snapshots).
@@ -109,16 +109,16 @@ following command:

 [[nomodeset_kernel_param]]
 Adding the `nomodeset` Kernel Parameter
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 Problems may arise on very old or very new hardware due to graphics drivers. If
 the installation hangs during boot, you can try adding the `nomodeset`
 parameter. This prevents the Linux kernel from loading any graphics drivers and
 forces it to continue using the BIOS/UEFI-provided framebuffer.

-On the {pve} bootloader menu, navigate to 'Install {pve} (Terminal UI)' and
-press `e` to edit the entry. Using the arrow keys, navigate to the line starting
-with `linux`, move the cursor to the end of that line and add the
+On the {product} bootloader menu, navigate to 'Install {product} (Terminal UI)'
+and press `e` to edit the entry. Using the arrow keys, navigate to the line
+starting with `linux`, move the cursor to the end of that line and add the
 parameter `nomodeset`, separated by a space from the pre-existing last
 parameter.

--
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