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Subject: [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 4/6] docs: pbs2to3: fix and
 improve wording
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Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
---
 docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst b/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst
index d6a14b91..f729c6d9 100644
--- a/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst
+++ b/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ pbs2to3
 Description
 ===========
 
-This tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfguration before,
-and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system Any failure must be addressed
-before the upgrade, and any waring must be addressed, or at least carefully
-evaluated, if a false-positive is suspected
+This tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfiguration before,
+and during the upgrade of a Proxmox Backup Server system. Any failures or
+warnings must be addressed prior to the upgrade. If you suspect that a message
+is a false positive, you have to make carefully sure that it really is.
 
 .. include:: ../pbs-copyright.rst
-- 
2.39.2