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---
 pve-installation.adoc | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc
index c86b620..e101ed3 100644
--- a/pve-installation.adoc
+++ b/pve-installation.adoc
@@ -161,10 +161,10 @@ the installation medium and restart your system.
 
 [thumbnail="screenshot/pve-install-summary.png"]
 
-If the installation failed check out specific errors on the second TTY
-(`CTRL + ALT + F2'), ensure that the systems meets the
+If the installation failed, check out specific errors on the second TTY
+(`CTRL + ALT + F2') and ensure that the systems meets the
 xref:install_minimal_requirements[minimum requirements]. If the installation
-is still not working look at the xref:getting_help[how to get help chapter].
+is still not working, look at the xref:getting_help[how to get help chapter].
 
 Further configuration is done via the Proxmox web interface. Point your browser
 to the IP address given during installation (https://youripaddress:8006).
-- 
2.30.2