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Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH pve-installer] installer: minor language fixup
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just some nitpicky changes.
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
---
html-common/tags | 1 +
html-pbs/page1.htm | 2 +-
html-pbs/tags | 1 +
html-pve/page1.htm | 8 ++++----
html-pve/passwd.htm | 10 +++++-----
html-pve/tags | 1 +
6 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
create mode 100644 html-common/tags
create mode 100644 html-pbs/tags
create mode 100644 html-pve/tags
diff --git a/html-common/tags b/html-common/tags
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..408de88
--- /dev/null
+++ b/html-common/tags
@@ -0,0 +1 @@
+!_TAG_FILE_SORTED 2 /0=unsorted, 1=sorted, 2=foldcase/
diff --git a/html-pbs/page1.htm b/html-pbs/page1.htm
index debfdf1..353f780 100644
--- a/html-pbs/page1.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/page1.htm
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<tbody><tr>
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top"><b>Please verify the installation target</b><br>
- The displayed hard disk is used for installation.
+ The displayed hard disk will be used for the installation.
<br>Warning: All existing partitions and data will be lost.
<br><br>
</td>
diff --git a/html-pbs/tags b/html-pbs/tags
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..408de88
--- /dev/null
+++ b/html-pbs/tags
@@ -0,0 +1 @@
+!_TAG_FILE_SORTED 2 /0=unsorted, 1=sorted, 2=foldcase/
diff --git a/html-pve/page1.htm b/html-pve/page1.htm
index d76cc8a..0ad0898 100644
--- a/html-pve/page1.htm
+++ b/html-pve/page1.htm
@@ -17,10 +17,10 @@
<table>
<tbody><tr><td><b>The Proxmox Installer</b>
automatically partitions your hard disk. It installs all required
- packages and finally makes the system bootable from hard disk.
+ packages and makes the system bootable from the hard disk.
All existing partitions and data will be lost.
<br><br>
- Press the Next button to continue installation.
+ Press the Next button to continue the installation.
</td></tr>
</tbody></table>
</p></td>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<tbody><tr>
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top"><b>Please verify the installation target</b><br>
- The displayed hard disk is used for installation.
+ The displayed hard disk will be used for the installation.
<br>Warning: All existing partitions and data will be lost.
<br><br>
</td>
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top" width="560"><b>Graphical user interface</b><br>
Final configuration will be done on the graphical user
- interface via a web browser.
+ interface, via a web browser.
<br><br>
</td>
</tr>
diff --git a/html-pve/passwd.htm b/html-pve/passwd.htm
index b1a8522..1c7d2fc 100644
--- a/html-pve/passwd.htm
+++ b/html-pve/passwd.htm
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@
<td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p>
<table>
<tr><td><b>Proxmox Virtual Environment</b> is a
- full featured highly secure GNU/Linux system based on Debian.
+ full featured, highly secure GNU/Linux system, based on Debian.
<br><br>
- Please provide the <i>root</i> password in this step.
+ In this step, please provide the <i>root</i> password.
</td></tr>
</table>
</p></td>
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
<tr>
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top"><b>Password:</b>
- Please use a strong password. It should have 8 or more characters.
- Also combine letters, numbers, and symbols.
+ Please use a strong password. It should be at least 8 characters long,
+ and contain a combination of letters, numbers, and symbols.
<br><br>
</td>
</tr>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
</tr>
<tr>
<td valign="top" width="30"></td>
- <td valign="top">Press the Next button to continue installation.</td>
+ <td valign="top">Press the Next button to continue the installation.</td>
</tr>
</table>
</p></td>
diff --git a/html-pve/tags b/html-pve/tags
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..408de88
--- /dev/null
+++ b/html-pve/tags
@@ -0,0 +1 @@
+!_TAG_FILE_SORTED 2 /0=unsorted, 1=sorted, 2=foldcase/
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