From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: <d.whyte@proxmox.com> Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 449BD67295 for <pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 9 Nov 2020 13:12:15 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 2E1A816308 for <pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 9 Nov 2020 13:11:45 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [212.186.127.180]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS id 876F3162FB for <pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 9 Nov 2020 13:11:43 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 4B61345CC7 for <pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 9 Nov 2020 13:11:43 +0100 (CET) From: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com> To: pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com Date: Mon, 9 Nov 2020 13:11:37 +0100 Message-Id: <20201109121137.8221-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.20.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.023 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED -2.3 Sender listed at https://www.dnswl.org/, medium trust SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record Subject: [pbs-devel] [PATCH pve-installer] PBS installer: Language fixup X-BeenThere: pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox Backup Server development discussion <pbs-devel.lists.proxmox.com> List-Unsubscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/options/pbs-devel>, <mailto:pbs-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=unsubscribe> List-Archive: <http://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pbs-devel/> List-Post: <mailto:pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com> List-Help: <mailto:pbs-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=help> List-Subscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pbs-devel>, <mailto:pbs-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=subscribe> X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 09 Nov 2020 12:12:15 -0000 - Correct spelling and grammar - Minor rewordings for readability Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com> --- html-common/ack_template.htm | 4 ++-- html-common/country.htm | 10 +++++----- html-common/ipconf.htm | 6 +++--- html-common/success.htm | 2 +- html-pbs/extract1-license.htm | 4 ++-- html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm | 14 ++++++++++---- html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm | 8 ++++---- html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm | 2 +- html-pbs/page1.htm | 6 +++--- html-pbs/passwd.htm | 10 +++++----- 10 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-) diff --git a/html-common/ack_template.htm b/html-common/ack_template.htm index e3e2775..48d7213 100644 --- a/html-common/ack_template.htm +++ b/html-common/ack_template.htm @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ <table> <tbody> <tr><td> - <b>Please verify</b> the displayed informations. + <b>Please confirm</b> the displayed information. Once you press the <b>Install</b> button, the installer will begin to partition your drive(s) and extract the required files. </td></tr> </tbody></table> @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ <tr><td>Keymap:</td> <td>__keymap__</td></tr> - <tr><td>E-Mail:</td> <td>__mailto__</td></tr> + <tr><td>Email:</td> <td>__mailto__</td></tr> <tr><td>Management Interface:</td> <td>__interface__</td></tr> diff --git a/html-common/country.htm b/html-common/country.htm index 6503afb..990a39f 100644 --- a/html-common/country.htm +++ b/html-common/country.htm @@ -16,11 +16,11 @@ <td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p> <table> <tr><td><b>The Proxmox Installer</b> - automatically makes location based optimizations, like - choosing the nearest mirror to download files. Also make sure - to select the right time zone and keyboard layout. + automatically makes location-based optimizations, like + choosing the nearest mirror to download files from. Also make sure + to select the correct time zone and keyboard layout. <br><br> - Press the Next button to continue installation. + Press the Next button to continue the installation. </td></tr> </table> </p></td> @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> <td valign="top"><b>Country:</b> The selected country is used to choose nearby mirror - servers. This will speedup downloads and make updates more + servers. This will speed up downloads and make updates more reliable. <br><br> </td> diff --git a/html-common/ipconf.htm b/html-common/ipconf.htm index fb46510..ed3fd9d 100644 --- a/html-common/ipconf.htm +++ b/html-common/ipconf.htm @@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ <tbody> <tr><td><b>Please verify</b> the displayed network configuration. You will need a valid network configuration to access the management - interface after installation.<br><br> - Afterwards press the Next button. You will be shown a list of the - options that you chose during the previous steps. + interface after installing.<br><br> + After you have finished, press the Next button. You will be shown a + list of the options that you chose during the previous steps. </td></tr> </tbody> </table> diff --git a/html-common/success.htm b/html-common/success.htm index a6884b3..218ecff 100644 --- a/html-common/success.htm +++ b/html-common/success.htm @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ <p> <b class="htext">Installation successful!</b> <br><br><br> - The __FULL_PRODUCT_NAME__ is now installed and ready to use. + __FULL_PRODUCT_NAME__ is now installed and ready to use. <br><br><br> <table border="0" width="500"> <tbody><tr> diff --git a/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm b/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm index df77fa8..9ceae4f 100644 --- a/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm +++ b/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ - Easy management<br> For more information, visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b> - or the project page about Proxmox Backup Server. + or the Proxmox Backup Server project page. <br><br> </td></tr> </table> @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> <td valign="top"> <b>Graphical User Interface</b><br> - Easily manage your data backups with the integrated web interface .<br><br> + Easily manage your backups with the integrated web interface.<br><br> </td> </tr> <tr> diff --git a/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm b/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm index 7f80d75..bede21f 100644 --- a/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm +++ b/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm @@ -16,8 +16,12 @@ <td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p> <table> <tr><td> - Proxmox Backup Server is production-ready and saves you money by reducing the amount of data stored.<br><br>The role based permission management combined with the integration of multiple external authentication sources is the base for a secure and stable environment.<br><br> - Visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b> for more information about commercial support subscriptions.<br><br> + Proxmox Backup Server is production-ready and saves you money, by + reducing the amount of data stored.<br><br>The role-based permission + management, combined with the integration of multiple external + authentication sources provides the basis for a secure and stable + environment.<br><br> + Visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b> for more information regarding commercial support subscriptions.<br><br> </td></tr> </table> </p></td> @@ -36,7 +40,9 @@ <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> <td valign="top"> <b>RESTful web API</b><br> - Resource-oriented architecture (ROA) and declarative API definition using JSON Schema enable easy integration for third party management tools. + The resource-oriented architecture (ROA) and declarative API definition + using JSON Schema enable easy integration for third party + management tools. </td> </tr> <tr></tr> @@ -44,7 +50,7 @@ <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> <td valign="top"> <b>Encryption</b><br> - To help protect against cyber attacks, encryption of your backups is done on the client-side using AES-256 in GCM mode. + To help protect against cyber attacks, encryption of your backups is done on the client-side, using AES-256 in GCM mode. </td> </tr> <tr></tr> diff --git a/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm b/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm index ce606b7..4dd1f09 100644 --- a/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm +++ b/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ <td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p> <table> <tr><td> - With the Proxmox Backup Server you can safely backup and restore your business critical data.<br> + With the Proxmox Backup Server, you can safely backup and restore your business critical data.<br> </td></tr> </table> </p></td> @@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> <td valign="top"> <b>Support for Proxmox VE</b><br> - The Proxmox Virtual Environment is fully supported and the seamless integration - allows you to easily backup VMs and container.<br> + The Proxmox Virtual Environment is fully supported, and the seamless integration + allows you to easily backup VMs and containers.<br> </td> </tr> <tr></tr> @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> <td valign="top"> <b>Web Console</b><br> - SSL secured browser-integrated console view to all datastores.<br> + SSL-secured, browser-integrated system console.<br> </td> </tr> <tr></tr> diff --git a/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm b/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm index 28efbe4..74069ec 100644 --- a/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm +++ b/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ <table> <tr><td> <b>Data Integrity</b><br> - The built in SHA-256 checksum algorithm assures the accuracy and consistency of your backups.<br><br> + The built in SHA-256 checksum algorithm ensures the accuracy and consistency of your backups.<br><br> </td></tr> <tr><td> <b>Compression</b><br> diff --git a/html-pbs/page1.htm b/html-pbs/page1.htm index 99b9c7e..debfdf1 100644 --- a/html-pbs/page1.htm +++ b/html-pbs/page1.htm @@ -17,10 +17,10 @@ <table> <tbody><tr><td><b>The Proxmox Installer</b> automatically partitions your hard disk. It installs all required - packages and finally makes the system bootable from hard disk. + packages and makes the system bootable from the hard disk. All existing partitions and data will be lost. <br><br> - To continue installation, press the Next button. + To continue the installation, press the Next button. </td></tr> </tbody></table> </p></td> @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> <td valign="top" width="560"><b>Graphical user interface</b><br> Final configuration will be done on the graphical user - interface via a web browser. + interface, via a web browser. <br><br> </td> </tr> diff --git a/html-pbs/passwd.htm b/html-pbs/passwd.htm index 07f0d77..d331b28 100644 --- a/html-pbs/passwd.htm +++ b/html-pbs/passwd.htm @@ -9,14 +9,14 @@ <tr><td> </td></tr> <tr> <td colspan="4" align="center" width="800"> - <b class="htext">Administration Password and E-Mail Address</b> + <b class="htext">Administration Password and Email Address</b> </td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p> <table> <tr><td><b>Proxmox Backup Server</b> is a - full-featured, highly secure system based on Debian GNU/Linux. + full-featured, highly secure system, based on Debian GNU/Linux. <br><br> In this step, please provide the <i>root</i> password. </td></tr> @@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ <tr> <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td> <td valign="top"><b>Password:</b> - Please use a strong password. It should have 8 or more characters. - Also combine letters, numbers, and symbols. + Please use a strong password. It should be at least 8 characters long, + and contain a combination of letters, numbers, and symbols. <br><br> </td> </tr> @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ </tr> <tr> <td valign="top" width="30"></td> - <td valign="top">To continue installation, press the Next button.</td> + <td valign="top">To continue the installation, press the Next button.</td> </tr> </table> </p></td> -- 2.20.1