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Am 17/05/2022 um 18:12 schrieb Dylan Whyte:
> This fixup covers every doc patch since my previous language fixup patch.
> 
> Note: not much attention was paid to certificate-management, as it's
> derived from pmg, which I had touched up not so long ago.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  docs/backup-client.rst          |  10 +--
>  docs/certificate-management.rst |   2 +-
>  docs/conf.py                    |   2 +-
>  docs/introduction.rst           |   2 +-
>  docs/local-zfs.rst              |   8 +--
>  docs/maintenance.rst            |   4 +-
>  docs/managing-remotes.rst       |  23 ++++---
>  docs/markdown-primer.rst        |  35 +++++-----
>  docs/storage.rst                |  30 ++++----
>  docs/sysadmin.rst               |   2 +-
>  docs/system-booting.rst         | 118 ++++++++++++++++----------------
>  docs/tape-backup.rst            |  44 ++++++------
>  docs/terminology.rst            |   6 +-
>  docs/traffic-control.rst        |  30 ++++----
>  docs/user-management.rst        |  84 +++++++++++------------
>  15 files changed, 200 insertions(+), 200 deletions(-)
> 
>

applied, thanks!